Score: 1 / 3
~8:54 at a park
Shauna covers the doomsday prediction at Ramset Park.
Leslie: Headline idea: "It's the end of the world as they know it, but Pawnee feels fine".
Shauna: That's a little long.
Leslie: Okay, "Zorp, schmorp! Doomsday prediction falls flat as citizens spend pleasant evening enjoying one of Pawnee's finest parks."
Shauna: Somehow longer.
[Shauna changes the topic to Ben.]
- Joy, the bank teller, counts money for April and Andy; Andy interjects too soon for their dialogue to pass.
- Leslie asks Ann whether she or Shauna is more charming; this is more about Ben than anything.
- Leslie tries to persuade Shauna to leave Ramset park; again, more about Ben.
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